Kalypsoโs Powers~ โจ๐
Here is some of my writing for my version of the Daughters of Atlas. Since theyโre from the magic realm I thought I would make their skin colorful, similar to the gods from Disneyโs Hercules.
This is just a little story sample I had in my mind when I was envisioning how I want her powers to work. The way they work in Fury of the Gods is cool and all, but I wanted to add something more fantastical and visually wicked.
And donโt worry guys once the Shazamly comes to Billyโs rescue the curse of madness gets reversed. Just having his family around him to validate that magic is real, and to check in on him is enough to reverse the damage done to his psyche and return his arms/veins to normal.
Although, please do be warned, Kalypsoโs curse is no joke because once the curse has fully corrupted a person, there is no cure to their madness, and their mental state will be permanently altered.
Okay, I know I was gone for a little bit, sorry about that lol. I was out of state for the holidays and I have a hard time writing/drawing when Iโm not in my comfort areas haha >_<.
But I wanted to share this. These are my little โscene cardsโ I guess you could call them. They just give you guys a little bit of insight to the anatomy of my Shazam story that Iโm outlining right now!
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I have these scenes in a lot more detail but I canโt show it to you guys because it looks like this lol.
But Iโm posting this now because Iโm just opening the floor to comments, suggestions, or questions for this story so far. :^)
I think some things that might be confusing is that I did technically write in a redemption arc for Black Adam. Which I know might be controversial for some, but his main โbeefโ with Billy is that heโs offended that The Wizard chose a new champion after he got banished to the furthest star in the galaxy.
But then once heโs defeated itโs revealed that The Wizard was actually kinda conflicted about having to banish him and Billy wasnโt meant to replace him. Billyโs much happier with his foster family on earth than being like The Wizards adopted son lol.
I still want him to be โpunishedโ at the end for trapping The Wizard and Tawny to try and take over The Rock of Eternity. So my solution for that would be to give him a โCrown of Thornsโ that nerf his powers a lot, but still keep him in his โmagic formโ. Since you know,,, if he were to say โShazamโ and revert to his mortal form he would die of old age almost immediately,,,,
But yeahh idk, let me know what you guys think. Right now Iโm working on writing scene 3. If any of you guys want to read scene 1 & 2 I have them completed, theyโre just in screenplay/script format lol.
Maybe Iโll convert them soon. Who knows?
Anyways k thx byeeee~โจ
This is my version of Mary Bromfield. ^_^
Right now Iโve just been experimenting with how I would write my own version of the Shazam origin stories and what modifications I could make to the character dynamics to make it my own. As of right now I deciding to change the sibling lineup a little bit to make Mary and Billy closer in age. I think that this would really emphasize both of their personalities, him being a bold, humorous trouble maker. And then her being a shy, wallflower kinda girl who tries to keep herself out of trouble.
This puts Freddy as the oldest sibling, which Iโm not really sure how much I like that idea so far. Maybe he could kinda use his goofy nature to have a good older brother dynamic with the other kids. Idk Iโm still working on it.
If you have any ideas or suggestions for this storyline please comment below!! ^_^ โก๏ธ๐
Rough sketch ideas for my version of the rock of eternity. โก๏ธ๐ ๐ด
I like to think of it as a floating island covered in old stone ruins and jungle foliage.
The thrones for the champions are near the center of the island. I still need to figure out where I would put the room of infinite doors? Maybe there is a secret entrance that you can open and travel down that is underground in the core of the island.
My plan is to kinda update the rock of eternity to have more to it than just being a cave. Like adding stone ruins and plant life all around gives it an ancient but magical vibe. ~โจ
I think adding a jungle kinda rainforest vibe to the island is also good for adding Tawny into the story. Giving them a natural habitat to run around while they assist the wizard.
Also I think in my version of the story Tawny is kinda like the wizards right-hand pet.
They have a magical gemstone in their forehead that gives them them telepathy, so that they can talk to people.
Theyโre very educated in magic, and they have been assisting the wizard with magical deeds for hundreds of years.
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โธ Tawnyโs Character Info
- Character Introduction Sheet
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โธ Tawny Drawings
- Tawny Sticky Note Doodle
- Tawny and The Wizard Doodle Page
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Trying to re-work my Shazam character designs. Obi first up is Billy.
I didnโt want to modify them too much because I like what Iโve done so far. However, I really wanna try and them them all model sheets, so that requires a lot more focus and intention with my lineart than Iโm used to lol,,,
I was also inspired to work on this today specifically because I read the new chapter. At first I thought it was gonna be the same, โBillyโs long-lost parent ruins Vasquez family adoptionโ plot line that the new52 had, but I was pleasantly surprised. I canโt tell which run I like better so far because like,,, Iโm really confused on why Billy & the Captain are 2 different people??? I have a hard time following that part. But, I enjoy the characterization a LOT more in this one. In the new 52 Billy is a little too much of an asshole imo. ๐
Like, I think in this new Dawn of DC version of Billy would have never yelled at Darla, and wouldnโt have picked random fights with Mary. Unlike his 2013-2019 counterpart lol. I really DO like characters who are a bit jaded & a little snarky though. I guess itโs a fine line that writers have to try and not cross.
Anyways that was my little ramble. If you would like to discuss the new run with me, or maybe let me know which version of Billy you prefer both my DMs & comments are open, as always. :)
Enjoy! ~ โก๏ธโค๏ธ
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CHARACTER SHEET
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NAME: Freddy Freeman
AGE: 17 years old
BIRTHDAY: May 21st 1990
HEIGHT: 6โ1 /186 cm
STATUS: Alive
OCCUPATION: Student at Fawcett High
SPECIES: Human
HAIR COLOR: Light Brown
EYE COLOR: Blue
OTHER INFO: Paralyzed left leg (Uses walking aides)
PERSONALITY/NARRATIVE ROLE
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Freddy is a free-spirited and fun loving character. He approaches every aspect of his life with a sly humor despite his troubled upbringing and unfortunate life circumstances.
Freddyโs role in the story is to be a friendly opposer to Billy, Countering his more cynical/jaded view on the world with levity.
Freddy is the first sibling to form a meaningful connection with Billy, which allows him to express his struggles/worries openly.
Freddy understands Billyโs struggles and meets him where heโs at emotionally, instead of trying to force a fake persona of happiness onto him like many have before.
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Freddyโs lesson throughout the story is helping Billy lighten up a little bit so he can form better connections with others.
Helping him understand that even though theyโve both been hurt a lot in the past, he shouldnโt emotionally โshut downโ and let those experiences negatively impact how he interacts with the world.
Freddyโs light-hearted and silly personality doesn't come from a place of naivete, but itโs an active choice. A choice that Freddy makes everyday to appreciate the little celebrations in life. Making him really emotionally open and socially approachable despite his troubled upbringing.
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Kinda a more interesting post for tonight. This is a comic page mock-up that I did for the third act of my Shazam story! ^_^ โก๏ธ
The idea here is that this is kinda the โinsideโ of the spell that allows Billy to share his powers with his siblings. In this scene Billyโs has just gotten ahold of The Wizardโs staff, causing it to activate its magic. So, we see a glimpse of Billy and all his siblings starting to magically float off the ground during the final battle against Black Adam. Showing that they are being affected by a spell of some sort.
Then, suddenly Billy is transported into this โmind palaceโ, that is a kinda like a shared liminal space to represent the connection Billy has formed with his siblings over the course of the story. When Billy is transported here, he finds shadowy figures of his siblings standing in the middle of a black, shadowy, fog.
He quickly approaches them, scared and confused. Heโs unsure of what is happening, because heโs just not that familiar with magic yet. Heโs trying to talk to Freddy, and ask him for help, but Freddy is not able to respond/interact with Billy. This shadowy figure is kinda like a โplaceholderโ for Freddy, and the other siblings as well. So, thatโs why heโs unresponsive in this scene.
However, while this spell is happening, Tawny is trying to get through to Billy. Shouting at him to say the magic word, โShazamโ and complete the spell. Then, once Billy hears Tawnyโs voice echo through this liminal space, he says the magic word, completes the spell, snaps back into reality, and sees that heโs temporarily empowered his foster siblings with the powers of living lighting. Meaning, this is my introduction to the Shazamly! Yay! ๐
Once the spell is completed these shadowy โplaceholdersโ for his siblings will be replaced with their actual consciousness, and theyโll look like their normal selves. Meaning, that when they all are using the powers of Shazam, theyโll have a shared liminal space where they can sense each otherโs connection. However, we donโt see this โsettingโ again for the rest of the story, because itโs not really relevant once Billy has successfully opened his heart, and shared the powers with his siblings.
It will be relevant again if/when I write more stories in this universe. But for now, Iโm just focusing on Billyโs origin story and putting the Shazamly in the third act.
But yeah, I just wanted to share this little snippet from the third act of my story. I have pretty much finished outlining my first story completely. I just donโt want to post it here yet, until Iโve turned my outline into like an actual screenplay or something lol. If youโre wondering what Iโve wrote,so far, itโs basically like if the 2019 Shazam film had more of a focus on fantasy and found family, instead of a focus on horror and wish-fulfillment. Which are all good themes but, I just wanted to tell my version of this story, and double down on my favorite tropes. :^).
So if you like Shazam, fantasy, found family, or just fan made stories in general stay tuned, I should have time to format and post my story, in its entirety, pretty soon!
Enjoy~โจ
Drawing an updated Shazam/Captian Marvel design!! โก๏ธโค๏ธ
Lots of minor tweaks over the past year but Iโm pretty happy with the updated version. Iโve been trying to understand 3D shapes & drawing forms since I started drawing Shazam and Iโm excited to learn more! ^_^
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