One: Gorgeous, What The Hell

Haiii!! :D

I just wanted to say I love your newest fic and its preview comic, it feeds my hunger not only for Fresh content, but from the perspective of his host no less, that's also friendly towards him! (LunaMiuna guest account in ao3 comments is indeed me btw) It resembles my own daydreams about Fresh except in place of Epic is my skeleton OC, Arial. I can ramble to you all about them if you want, as well as my new parasite OC akin to Fresh! Would you want that? •v•? No pressure tho-

Also, I really like your portrayal of Fresh. Loved that cold and uncaring yet chill and friendly attitude, it's so fresh, hehe. :>

Oh my, thank you! I replied to all your comments, by the by ;)

Fresh is indeed pretty chill.

Hey, if you like my writing, why not check out the other things Solis and I have been writing and posting?

As Solis is on break for a few more days, there won't be any updates to Yet Another Parasite, but the other two are still updating as I have more things to correct and eventually post.

It could give you a lot of context to what the hell the setting for their multiverse is too, and heck, I like your comments :')

Speaking of comments, I'm gonna be using a lot of comments to make the Creator's little speeches during the fics...

Thanks again for correcting my little 4 am fuckups.

Oh, and-- Cross' trauma will make much more sense when Yet Another Battle catches up to his part of the plot more. Yet Another Mistake is Dusk and Fatal as a pair (Dusk is my baby boy I could rant about him to you if you'd like).

As for your OC, hells yeah, rant!

so pretty. SO PRETTY.

My contribution <3 🏳️‍⚧️ (He's one of us, ONE OF US.)

Cross belongs to Jakei

Joan (an Error alternate, post transition) and Ekleipsis, @rinky-dinky-dink's Nightmare

even I got offender and I don't know who tf the anon was talking about....

Im not prev but it probably wasn’t Spooks fic, I’ve read it and it was pretty good/interesting even if her pacing was a little wonky at times and she don’t update very often. It was probably somewon else. I know I’ve seen another one where they used pantheon, a onshot on Ao3 i think? It was pretty dark, with heavy gore themes and mind fuckery. Spook’s fic… tries to be scary n suspenseful but idk if she do it very well tbh. No hate against her ofc, it just feels out of placeingly self indulgent.? Like Nightmare would not act like that lol, yknoe? She’s gotten odly popular despite that tho, so kudus to her. I think her fics called ‘monsters of the dark’ or smth idk. I keep tryn to give her advise but she don’t answer despite saying she always answers asks, pretty odd if youd ask me🤔

Anyway love your AU and all the original ideas you got, long time fan👋 keep up the good work man. We need better writers like youself 💪🔥

-long fan anon 💥

anon... for signing your message with "long time fan", i have to admit, it seems like you've had a critical misunderstanding about me and how i feel about storytelling. i'm not mad, but since you brought this to my inbox looking for my opinion, i'm going to give it to you:

1: fandom is a hobby. it is amateur in the truest sense of the word - someone who does something for free simply because they love to do it. none of us are getting into publishing houses, and furthermore, that level of quality is very rarely achievable by only one person.

2: as i said here more in-depth, the thing that makes our stories truly unique is the fact that they're self-indulgent. your own preferences and interests are the most unique thing you bring to the table; if you're not using them, you're just hashing out someone else's interests using disney's dryass 3-step "guaranteed-to-sell" formula. and to be frank, regurgitating that formula ad-fucking-nauseam is a one-way ticket to the worst sin a story can possibly achieve, far more than being boring, clichéd, derivative, repetitive or badly-written: being soulless.

3: my version of nightmare is no more canon or "correct" or "in-character" than hers or anyone else's. in fact, if you want to talk about in-character, joku has stated that NM is a "thing", not a person - so by joku's canon, anyone who portrays him in any sort of sympathetic light at all is portraying him "incorrectly". and to be quite frank... i find that horrifically boring. if someone wants to make him sickeningly sweet, of course, i would personally prefer if i could see how he got from point A to point B... but ultimately, if it's not my story, why should i give a damn if it suits my tastes? it's like going to a fucking bakery and complaining about the cakes being all lemon flavored when you yourself are a baker. you can just go make your own cake!!

4: "I keep tryn to give her advise but she don’t answer" - did your advice sound anything like this ask, anon? because even i got offended reading it, and the fic isn't even mine. and far more importantly, did they ask for critique? if the answer is yes - which i doubt - did you then ask questions to find out what they wanted to achieve with their own story and give them advice to help them reach that goal? because if someone asks for critique and you respond by trying to transform the story into something you like, that's bad critique etiquette - as is, far more importantly, giving unsolicited critique to works that aren't asking for it at all.

5: cruelty ≠ critique. as i said above, to critique a work is to attempt to help the author reach their goals. no matter someone's skill level, there's always going to be something about their work that you don't personally like - and using that as fuel to be disparaging to the artist is not critique, it's cruelty. ten tantita pinche madre, man, christ

6: "she don’t update very often" - this is fandom, anon. tiktok's fast fashion treatment towards media nowadays is not indicative of how fandom really works. undertale is, what, 8 years old, now? and we're all still here for love of skeletons. what do you expect people to be doing to survive in all that time? photosynthesizing? i'd be fascinated to meet them if that was true - but personally, i have to work to get money to eat. and before that, i had to go to school or else get thrown in juvie. people've got shit to do, man.

7: "It was probably somewon else", "She’s gotten odly popular despite that tho" - if their work has gotten really popular, there's probably a reason. and not to elevate english to an undeserved standard when it's such a shit language, but i imagine - going out on a limb here - it probably has something to do with her being able to use spellcheck.

and finally, 8: in the time it's taken me to answer this ask, you have sent me MORE asks pressuring me to answer you faster. that shit does not fly on my blog, anon, and especially not after you already admitted to harassing the writer in question with unwanted, bad-form "critique" of their work. i am not so goddamn oblivious or passionate about my own interests to not notice that you're trying to use me as a soapbox, which further makes your tag as "long time fan" ridiculous - because i have made my stance on harassment quite clear.

"but keegan, you critique things all the time!", i hear you saying. "what makes your critiques so much better, huh?"

well, the thing is, anon, even if i express frustration with the original stories not going the way i had hoped they would, my worldbuilding posts are still not critiques of their source materials because i'm not going to the authors of these stories and trying to help them reach their own goals, NOR am i taking my own desires for the work and making it the author's fucking problem. instead, i'm sat over here in my own little corner doing my own thing, and furthermore regularly clarifying to the people who like my worldbuilding that my feelings on the author's work is quite positive, in fact, despite whatever qualms might drive me to take my own fanfictions in a different direction. and as a matter of fact, a significant part of the reason i made multiverse tau an au in the first place was because i knew my own vision for these characters was going to deviate so harshly from the goals their creators had expressed, and i specifically wanted to go out of my way to avoid causing confusion. i did NOT want people taking my portrayals of these characters, conflating them with the originals, and then going to make that the creator's problem. multiverse TAU is an AU where i take whatever nitpicky bullshit nothingburgers that plague my mind and i do whatever i want with them, and in doing so, ironically, i'm doing a fine job of minding my own damn business.

in short: please do not bring critique of other people's work into my inbox, and furthermore please do not admit to me that you've been harassing people, and furthermost PLEASE do not harass ME when i don't jump the gun to agree with you on the matter. again: i have made my stance on harassment abundantly clear. you are creating problems for yourself because you have nothing better to do with your life - your time (and mine, AND theirs) would be much more pleasantly spent if you could manage to find some sort of constructive hobby, instead.

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Hey I was more curious about your more serious lore with trickster sans

He kinda gives the energy of Peter Parker or Mark Grayson (invincible) WHICH IS MAKING ME GO HM, I AM WORRIED BUT HAVE POPCORN

Hello there! The lore is still in the works, been working on it past these days hahaha I do have a base general idea on what happened though 🔥 Feel free to ask anything about it really, I’ll be small lore dropping as I settle and develop more of the lore/au as time goes on eheh

He does match some of their energy, stay tuned hehe 🤭

disclaimer: speciesism and specism isn't the same thing as racism.

Undertale doesn't exactly touch on those ideas of specism, the monsters are accepted outside, the humans are beloved on the inside.

Though, when you have "there was a war, people A and people B are majorly upset at each other, people A lock people B in a giant cave to die", I mean....there's really uh. That context to take in. I think if it's done well and in an AU that deviates HEAVILY from the original take, then sure, fine, go ahead.

The problem is that often it's not well done, because simply- the people making content aren't professional writers and artists, they're just (mostly) regular peeps who often bite off more than they can chew, and it leaves everyone with a bitter taste in their mouths.

When you have Sans go through a genocide, be fought against relentlessly by a murderous child, and then do a pacifist, escape to the surface, then Sans will quite naturally be just a smidge anxious around that same child, won't he? trauma and whatnot. however I don't think making Sans have a bias against humans forever and ever is stupid :')

Transcript: As a black person in the utdr fandom it really weirds out me when people claim the monsters in undertale are "racist". Honestly just typing this gives me a really uneasy feeling thinking about it all. White people who don't have any proper knowledge to be talking on situations like this and entirely missing the point of what's going on, to the point where it feels almost intentional. Saying this on here rather than my own blog because I don't know how people would react if I said stuff like this, I rb posts like this but I don't really have experience talking about them myself

Idk I might send another ask in again another time going more in depth but I don't even know how to explain how it makes me feel but I can try if anyone really wants

I love Jerror. He's amazing.

jon "jerror" errbuckle inflicts rage. seething rage into my soul. i used to welcome him in with open arms, but now i live in fear. in anger. i am afraid of something i helped make years ago. i am scared.

CONTINUED TALE

Asgore can't do it. He just can't bring himself to kill children. Instead, he asks Sans, Gaster's child and the new Judge, telling him that's what the role entails. Sans isn't convinced, he really isn't. But then a child falls in the underground, he goes to meet them and- and- He didn't mean to. He swear, he didn't mean to.

The LV is already in his system, though, the soul absorbed.

It was an accident.

The next one wasn't slain by Sans, but by Undyne, and the soul was lost forever as it wasn't collected in time.

Except, Sans is getting sick, and sicker, and sicker some more, because he's not a boss monster, he's not made to harbour more than one soul and the human's is consuming his own, slowly, agonizingly. Alphys can't help, so Asgore has another, worse idea: he gives Sans more Souls. Sans doesn't want them, but hey, if he's gonna die anyway, might as well try to keep the rest of the monsters alive. He tries not to think about the kids.

He now has three souls in his system, two kids escaped, one kid is plain dead, and a seventh falls in the underground. Sans dies, and finds out he can actually continue from his last save point...