Mongolian armour - Huyag.
Most armour was made of hardened leather and iron, laced together onto a fabric backing, sometimes silk.
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How can you talk about anything else today. She was six. Millions heard her cries begging to be saved. We heard her older cousin be slaughtered, heard the baby pull the phone from her cousin's dead hands, heard her cry and beg to be saved, to be allowed to live, to be pardoned for a crime no one in that fucking car committed. The occupation knew she was there, knew she was the only one alive in that pile of bodies, and they killed her anyway. They knew, they knew, they knew. They allowed paramedics to approach her, and then bombed them just mere meters away from her, then killed her. The occupation allowed them to believe she could be saved and then killed all of them moments away from her rescue. She was in a car fleeing the evacuation zone along the correct route as instructed. The ambulance waited three hours, three hours of her being trapped between the rotting bodies of her dead family, for the occupation's permission to save her, and when they gave it, the occupation killed them anyway. What else is there to say. How can you quantify that level of cruelty. How many more worse things have happened that we don't have a recording of? How much evil has the zionist occupation regime been allowed to get away with in the interest of western imperialism? How many six year old girls who love bratz, who have a bluey plush, who want to grow up to be doctors or ballerinas or astronauts, have been sniped from this earth? Their bodies desecrated, left to bloat and be eaten by animals and have their graves bulldozed and their organs taken? At least ten fucking thousand. At least.
prompt list by @novelbear
"you're my everything."
suddenly pulling them toward you to wrap them in a hug
^ or to plant a firm kiss on their forehead, lips, or cheek
"i love the idea of growing old with you."
defending them from getting teased because "you're the only one allowed to laugh at them"
"who needs friends? i have you."
making a little scrapbook of every treasured memory together and giving it to them
getting them cute matching jewelry, clothes, etc.
"i'll choose you always. no matter what."
putting the word "my" in front of their name when calling for them
"you're all i ever needed."
firmly holding their hand in public
bragging about them to others whenever they make an achievment
^ "that's my [name]! that's my partner! i'm dating them!"
(jokingly) sulking and moping when someone else gets the slightest bit of attention
holding them in your lap (even if there's plenty of space/seats)
"you know you're stuck with me, right?" "thank god i am..."
back and forth talking all night about the future
"you're all mine, you got that? i'm not sharing."
types of fantasy subgenres - writing help
high / epic fantasy - a genre of fantasy that holds its own world and creatures. examples of this could be J.R.R. Tolkien's LOTR, or C.S. Lewis' Chronicles of Narnia
low fantasy - a genre where there are regular magical happenings in "our" world—such as a magical school, or people with magical abilities. this could be found in J.K. Rowling's Harry Potter, or Studio Ghibli's Spirited Away
urban fantasy - essentially low fantasy, only it takes place in an urban setting such as a big city. an example of this is Cassandra Clare's City of Bones
sword and sorcery - fantasy that is centred around swords, magic, and witchcraft. it is a subgenre of high fantasy. a book is Robert E. Howard's Conan series
dark fantasy - fantasy elements mixed with horror. The Atlas Six, by Olivia Blake
fable - a story with a moral lesson
arthurian fantasy - anything derived from the tales of King Arthur (the Sword in the Stone, etc.)
crosswords fantasy - essentially where the main character crosses between their world and a fantasy world. an example of this could be Lewis Carroll's Alice in Wonderland
dragon fantasy - what it sounds like.
historical fantasy - a cross between the historical fiction and low fantasy subgeneres. it could be set in a royal court filled with goblins, for example, in a time that was once present on earth.
First consider the type of betrayal you want. Will it be minor to the story or absolutely earth shattering? Will you be leaving little breadcrumbs/hints for the reader to piece together, or will it come out of no where and blindside both the reader and characters? Be careful though because the latter can feel unrealistic or make the reader feel cheated.
Here are some tips on how to write betrayals in your story:
1) Set up the betrayal in a way that isn’t obvious. Leave tiny clues, use foreshadowing, drop hints in the background. Body language and dialogue can be great places to add subtle hints.
2) Make your readers invested in your characters. If the reader doesn’t care about the protagonist or even the betrayer, they won’t feel anything when the big deception happens.
3) The betrayer needs a motivation. Why are they betraying your protagonist?
4) It has to have an effect your protagonist. Usually the betrayer is someone close to the protagonist, so when they are deceived, it hurts like crap.
5) Do some research on the craft of lying. It can be hard for a character to keep up a mask for the entire story. Google some real-life betrayals in history, or in famous literature/movies. Study how the betrayals are hinted at and effectively revealed.
6) Play around with POV. A fun way to build tension is to have certain characters know things that others do not. Or perhaps your readers know about the betrayal-to-be before the characters do. This could put them on the edge of their seats waiting for your characters to figure it out before it’s too late.
7) Betrayal isn’t black and white. I don’t think betrayal is as simple as good and bad… it can get muddy. For example, what if the betrayer is being blackmailed? Mind controlled? Manipulated? Here are a few betrayal pathways to consider:
Evil from the start to the end, was never truly a friend.
Manipulated into betraying their friends
Wants to be on the “winning side”
Is offered gold or safety of their family for the betrayal
Blackmailed or threatened into the betrayal
They’re lesser or a “loser” in the beginning and can obtain power through this betrayal
Conflicted and stuck in between— this betrayer doesn’t know which side to pick and is constantly being tormented between the choice
The betrayer feels cheated/overlooked by the protagonist and choses to switch sides.
They’re betraying the protagonist to secretly protect them
They have no choice— literally. Mind control or magically forced
They think they’re genuinely doing the right thing
A remorseful betrayer who realizes his mistake but it’s too late, he is too far gone or the damage has already been done.
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I did some more fantasy archery trope testing. This time the arrow stabby thing!
I want to see characters being taken care of in an explicit and worshipful way. Home-cooked meals. Hair brushed and braided by gentle hands. Little gifts just because.
I want to read about characters who are not used to kindness being bombarded by acts of service. This trope works romantically and platonically. Give me found family and acts of service - all the ways a character is wrapped up in wordless, explicit care after years of cruelty and having no idea how to handle. I need it.
Paul Mescal having the time of his life getting yelled at by Andrew Scott…. He's so me