Going feral over Hananene is always an understandable reason so I don't really mind xD
I really like revisiting the earlier chapters after reading the newer ones because it helps give new perspective on the earlier interactions of these two.
The way how Hanako speaks to Yashiro, even from the beginning of their partnership, is so cute and sweet in a way I don't know how to explain. Sure, he's definitely still a jerk at times, but the general manner in which he interacts with her makes me smile like an idiot.
I like how he's not even angry or too upset with her, he's simply like, "Stop the cap. Just fess up and I'll help."
I am in full agreement of this, that hair is giving Yashiro vibes so bad. The hair and art is gorgeous.
Guys trust me this is what Nenes hair looks like I swear I sweeeaaarrr!!!!!!! she just straightens it sometimes I SWEAR
I photoshopped this picture together because I wanted a specific look for her. I did this when I was 15 but she could look better. I don't think it's too bad though. And yes, I know, she has the Gwen hood---I just really liked it an wanted to use it for her.
Here's how she looks with the mask off (don't know why I didn't keep the original details for this one--check the alt text)
(She is not MJ, but in fact her cousin)
It's not the *greatest* photoshop I've done, but I was 15 so I'll cut myself some slack. I actually really like the patterns I used here.
This actually helps so much, please marry me
Writing Tips
Punctuating Dialogue
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➸ “This is a sentence.”
➸ “This is a sentence with a dialogue tag at the end,” she said.
➸ “This,” he said, “is a sentence split by a dialogue tag.”
➸ “This is a sentence,” she said. “This is a new sentence. New sentences are capitalized.”
➸ “This is a sentence followed by an action.” He stood. “They are separate sentences because he did not speak by standing.”
➸ She said, “Use a comma to introduce dialogue. The quote is capitalized when the dialogue tag is at the beginning.”
➸ “Use a comma when a dialogue tag follows a quote,” he said.
“Unless there is a question mark?” she asked.
“Or an exclamation point!” he answered. “The dialogue tag still remains uncapitalized because it’s not truly the end of the sentence.”
➸ “Periods and commas should be inside closing quotations.”
➸ “Hey!” she shouted, “Sometimes exclamation points are inside quotations.”
However, if it’s not dialogue exclamation points can also be “outside”!
➸ “Does this apply to question marks too?” he asked.
If it’s not dialogue, can question marks be “outside”? (Yes, they can.)
➸ “This applies to dashes too. Inside quotations dashes typically express—“
“Interruption” — but there are situations dashes may be outside.
➸ “You’ll notice that exclamation marks, question marks, and dashes do not have a comma after them. Ellipses don’t have a comma after them either…” she said.
➸ “My teacher said, ‘Use single quotation marks when quoting within dialogue.’”
➸ “Use paragraph breaks to indicate a new speaker,” he said.
“The readers will know it’s someone else speaking.”
➸ “If it’s the same speaker but different paragraph, keep the closing quotation off.
“This shows it’s the same character continuing to speak.”
To the person or people in my inbox who keep messaging me regarding Palestine donations---I know y'all are scams. I probably have had over 10 this past week alone. I've blocked you over and over and you keep harassing me. The next message I get in my inbox that asks me for donations when I know for a full fact you're a scam because I've checked your mess, I WILL be reporting you. Full stop.
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Cringe at myself as a person, tolerate myself as a writer :)
Love myself as a person, hate myself as a writer.
I only heard of these two since basically yesterday and I'm already obsessed with them. I'll take a comic, a TV series, a movie, a book---something---anything but I need more of them PLEASE.
We need more couples with their dynamic, I am BEGGING like Måneskin!
I'm so tired of the 'bad boy' or emotionally stunted male love interests for stories.
I want a story with a decent guy who just so happens to like leather and rides a motorcycle while being extroverted and funny.
"That sounds a bit unrealistic---"
So is having a healthy relationship with someone who glitches just from trying to say, "I feel ____" so I guess we're both at a standstill here.
I love a dark and brooding love interest as much as the next person, but it's honestly getting pretty old. Vintage even.
Sorry not sorry for wanting more media with fictional couples that have healthy communication and basic respect.
Mr. Gap for real said, "World Star"
(HS!Au) class argument 💢🗯️
Sounds amazing, I hope you two stay together ^^
Y'all can keep your emotionally constipated morally gray non-committal yet jealous shadow men. I want a dude to give me cuddles and help me build Lego sets.