Goal was 8hrs, I managed 4 (note to self: start earlier in the day and do longer bursts, lol)
Also, writing for that long is hella hard and with all the little breaks for stretching/eating/water it's also pretty long but I managed to keep a pretty even pace of 1-2k words per hour which is fairly solid for me
Total WC for the day: 5,029
2,948 words towards my original WIP called Sealed (info below) and 2,081 for a bkdk post-war fanfic WIP
Sealed WIP info:
Title: Sealed Genre: thriller/mystery, queer romance, coming-of-age
One line summary: In a town where ghosts abound and mediums are detested, four teenagers are thrust into the heart of a deadly mystery that forces them to decide who they are, who they want to be, and how much they’re willing to risk for it.
Slightly sillier one-line summary: Toss together a shunned medium, a secret-keeping prodigy, a spitfire Catcher-in-training, and her boyfriend who really doesn’t wanna be involved, then sprinkle in a string of mysterious attacks and watch as shit hits the fan. *in this WIP “Catcher” is the term for ghost hunter
Characters: Nishtha- a young medium living by herself who is only ever acknowledged by her neighbor
Veronica: a new transfer student from a very long and very talented line of Catchers who keeps her cards close to her chest
Cherry: A Catcher-in-training who’s struggling to become stronger even while her boyfriend pulls away and her leader keeps ditching her to Catch solo
Carter: A conformist that’s afraid of change and whose family is forced to take in the medium cousin who almost killed him as a child
i have the “Umino Iruka Adopts Naruto Uzumaki” tag favorited on ao3, it honestly brings me so much comfort
love to see them happy :)
Sometimes a calm afternoon with your adopted son is what you might need
I’d be down to play Game #1 if anyone’s got title suggestions :)
Feel free to send them as an ask or as a comment, whatever your preference
Choose a title or let your followers send you some in. Write a short drabble or a full story with that title. What is the first idea that comes to your mind?
+ if you take the same title and write completely different stories/different genres with it
Let your followers send you the titles and then create a short summary for what a potential story would be about.
Choose one title for every letter in the alphabet from these lists and fill them or let your followers pick characters for you to write a story for each title with. (Inspired by evilwriter37)
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Clip Studio Paint | Dec 3, 2024
What they do at those lectures ig
A little comfort for my baby Kacchan cause he needs it rn (I'm the one who needs it)
Chilchuck and Marcille are so sibling-coded in this scene lmao
Chilchuck, embodying the well-known rage of being forced into an apology by your mom only to get a smartass response:
That is the face of a man who swallowed his pride and then choked on it
For me, I try to replace words like said with something more specific, but only if the dialogue needs it. So like:
“I hate you,” he said.
can be a lot less effective in an argument scene than,
“I hate you!” he shouted.
So advice #1 is add specificity so you can paint the image that you want your readers to have. If I’m struggling to find the specific word I want to use I’ll sometimes try OneLook Thesaurus, but honestly sometimes the simple ones you think of first work best (he shouted vs he vociferated, yk?)
But sometimes you don’t even need the specificity in the dialogue tag to make the image clear, you can focus on description and leave the dialogue standing on its own, like:
Tommy gripped Clarence by the collar, his nostrils flaring.
“I hate you!”
As long as it’s clear who’s speaking, stand alone dialogue can be really effective and it’s smth I’ve had recommended to me before. So advice #2 would be to simply drop some of the said’s or ask’s that aren’t doing much for your dialogue. (But this doesn’t mean it’s automatically better to cut out all of them, especially if some of those tags do a lot of work for the pacing of your dialogue, it’s really up to your own judgement as the all-knowing author)
And advice #3 is just that writers notice the said’s and ask’s way more than a reader ever does, bc to a reader those words tend to become part of the landscape of what they’re reading and feel very natural but if you choose a synonym of said that feels really out of place, then they’ll definitely notice it
So overall I’d say don’t get too in your head about it :)
Having a lot of said’s and ask’s is totally normal, it’s really just up to you if you think they’re not doing enough work to paint the picture you want or if it might be punchier to have to dialogue be without tags! Might even be worth it to look at a piece of writing you really like to see that author’s balance of said/asked vs more specific tags vs no tags at all, especially to note which ones you, as a reader, like the most
Hope this helps and best of luck with your novel!!
I'm using said and asked way to many times in my writing. Where do you all get your synonyms from??
And don't tell me 'Google'
Bakugou: dunce face, he's gonna find you. start over.
Kaminari: start what? over.
Bakugou: no. start over.
Kaminari: start what? over.
Midoriya: *appears over Kami like the specter of death* gotcha! :)
Kaminari: ..im cooked. over.
Batfam X 1-A class🫠🫠
l was supposed to finish this one for the last Halloween lmao... Sorry (I lowkey forgot to finish it...).
@bi-focal12 you probably forgot that i was gonna draw them too, sorry😔😭
ALSO, for the people who wants to know which one cosplayed which one ⬇️
Iida = Alfred
Sero = Jason
Eijirou = Dick Grayson
Mina = Stephanie
Uraraka = Batgirl
Denki = Tim Drake
Yaoyorozu = Wonder Woman
Shoto = Superman
Mineta = Damian
Izuku = Joker
Katsuki = Batman
felt, lol
i came across the phrase 'what we call writer's block is almost always ordinary fear' in a writing textbook once and it seriously changed how i approach writer's block though. usually im able to recognize my hesitation to write as a fear that whatever i write will inevitably turn out bad, so i focus on trying to shift my mindset so that i can get words on the page first and make them sound good later
when its a lack of inspiration though, it helps to read other things, watch shows/movies, listen to music, look at art, etc or even just write a poem or smth short and irrelevant to the project im trying to work on before going back to it
I feel like my writer’s block just comes and goes randomly and it’s really not helping me fight the urge to procrastinate lol
More surfer Izuku and lifeguard Katsuki
The expectations vs realities of the meet-cute
The reality is not based around my own surfing experiences whaaaaat